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V2

Hold.
Do not turn away
And keep my hopes alive
Say you will stay
____________________________
Keep.
The seasons come and go
And yet here I stay
Waiting for love to turn my way
_____________________________
Give.
hand Yourself in to my love
Chances passed in the night
And still I devise ways
______________________________

Release.
The fear that takes you away
from my prison's cage
Will lead you back to me again
_______________________________

Till then you'll hold,
keep my notion warm,
give what you can
till loves great release...

V1
Hold.
Do not turn away
Say you will stay
And keep my hopes alive
____________________________
Keep.
The seasons come and go
And yet here I stay
Waiting for love to turn my way
_____________________________
Give.
Chances passed in the night
And still I devise ways
hand Yourself in to my love
______________________________

Release.
The fear that takes you away
from my prison's cage
Will lead you back to me again
_______________________________

Till then you'll hold,
keep my notion warm,
give what you can
till loves great release...

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Beavis's picture

You are really stretching

You are really stretching yourself, and very great things are happening! This is really another form you do very well ;-)

SSmoothie's picture

hey! how did I miss your comment beaves???

sorry! lol just going through old poems and having a laugh! ;) Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Fitzgerald's picture

What a beautiful piece.

What a beautiful piece. You're awesome SS

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OMG! TONY!!!!

I AM GOING STRAIGHT TO YOUR PORTFOLIO! MISSED YOU! HOW WAS EVERYTHING? YOU STILL VERY BUSY? Hope you managed to write some more! Been very busy so only got time to jot stuff down before I forget it, lol! Welcome back my friend! HugSS!!!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

kerry's picture

Love this :)

Even the structuring of this is perfect -- and it ends with the hope of something transcendent to come; well done!

SSmoothie's picture

thanks kerry!

I know theie is still need work but at least the bones are there! You are very kind HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am