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dont look down and you wont know you stepped in it. (this poem is a quite insensitive so dont read if your npt feeling strong) cheers.
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RANTS vs TELL IT LIKE IT IS!!! Tired of everyone' else's shit
and inability to cope with it
Dont drag me in, don't drag me down
turn your own frown upside-down
Take your head out of your assess
stop the self-rightious bullshit of the masses
emo Crap and cutter's fads grow the fuck up
without doubt no more don't be a stuff up
and look around there's so much
you're friggin' missing out on.
Dwelling on shit you should've forgotten
Don't drag me through your hell ,
I've got blooming roses to smell
So take your repressed sad friggin soul
and self absorbed boo hop attitude
And haunt someone else's smooth ride
I'm off today to give thanks and
appreciate my good tide
I dragged myself out of my own friggen mess
and showed backbone and pride,
see ya later alligators,
go Float like a log, let it slide,
I'm off taking a cool trip
on a self-woven mystic carpet ride.
Your welcome to come
just don't pick at the edges
live for tomorrow and;
never look down.
yep
Man,, I wish I could come up with something like this.,So refreshing. It changed my thought pattern about my veiw of going to work today, (although its still a shithole) thanx smoothanator.....
TRIZ
lol triz,
Just keep looking ahead lol! Thanks 'smoothinator' you make me sound cool! Love it! Ha ha ! Thanks cheers Ssmoothinator... Cause you know, I'll be back! Lol! I respect your work, triz I love many of your works! :D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Lol! You Go Girl!
I loved this one! I love how you seemed to let out the crap out that was building up deep inside you! Yay!!! Yes, lots of people will stay within what they are comfortable with, and if something confronts them, that they are not comfortable with, they will ignore it, or even blow it off. They will refuse to go outside of their comfort zones, and in doing so, are closing themselves off to the real world!
I agree that they need to take their hands, pull down their pants, shove their hands up their asses, feel around for their heads, when they find it they need to take hold of it, and yank their heads out of their asses!!
Nice write, and enjoyable read!
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lol! 789 youre such a treat!
Ha ha ha ha! Loved your delicately framed response! So YOU GO GIRL! So rose, so young! ;) stay you, you're beautiful! God bless you darl ! ;D HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
^_^ I'm glad that you liked
^_^ I'm glad that you liked the response! Lol, You rock hon!
<3
hahahaha, loved the jovial
hahahaha, loved the jovial sense to this, yeah ... !!! half the time some people out there have had their heads up their asses all their life, wouldnt it be a shock if they actually saw prettier colors then brown :P
gailjames
I really love that you got
I really love that you got exactly where I was going with this! You're awesome, not everyone gets it! Yeah colours exactly! Lol ha ha ha loved your response cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."