the fall

Catch me,
I'm falling!
Lost my balance
while Checking my
Bearings
As you walked unchecked
Through my life.
Pull the pain
Of my heart out
With the gentle tug
of invisible string
Catch me,
I'm falling again
It feels like a dream
But all the same
I'm going down again
Catch me in between
Heartbeats before the thud
Of each painful revelation
Suspended by your strings
As I fall at your feet

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Catch me! 

Catch me! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Wow, I like it! It's a nice

Wow, I like it! It's a nice read! It moves ssmoothly and is an excellent portrait of how humans end up falling for others so easSily!
Loved it!


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Thanks moriah, Yes it is

Thanks moriah,
Yes it is quite an experience and very painful when u fall and the pain of it not quite working, or being 'love' for the other is a torturous place to be in, the invisible strings in this poem symbolizes giving yourself unwittingly to someone totally, when we shouldn't. cheers. SS :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Or when You are freaking

Or when You are freaking crazy over someone, but they are just using you!


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how true

Very often this is the case for many. :(


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Yea... Sadly

Yea... Sadly


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