The Nothing.

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The sound of nothing
is impossible to hear.
Silence is another matter,
it can be heard on occasion.
Silence can be deafening;
but the sound of nothing,
that is something else.
you can never imagine it;
bearable was your silence
but, your nothing is
far too much to bear.
I block my ears from the sound.
I scream to make it go.
but everytime I stop;
there it is again, nothing.
Please bring me back
your silence,
that at least
I can
comprehend.

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oh wow!

oh wow!


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Eerie sensation...

I felt as though I was experiencing that which you wrote of as I was reading. I believe you captured some form of dreadful emotion or experience within your poem. I truly did enjoy this.

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Thankyou that means alot

especially since your work so far is very intriguing and well written. Kind regards SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."