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I'm Bigger Than Ben Hur! There is nothing
you can do or say
to keep me from
my right of way.
I can be
who I want to be
at any time
in any day;
And if the world
is your oyster,
then it's just
full of snot to me.
I would rather
have the pearl
the kind that
wisdom eats.
I have my
lines of sight
on a grander theme.
I will be
what I am
and what I am
meant to be.
I can not unsee
the things I've seen
I can not unsay
the things you said
I can not unfeel
The things you did
But I can choose
to ignore it,
though that's not
for me.
I will just
work hard
and bide
my time.
Let the ropes
of fate decide
where I next
will swing;
Then I'll choose
to jump into
the abyss
Unlike where you
see nothing,
I see
the greatest potential
for bliss!
Nothing can
defeat this idea
not here
or the next
my dear.
There is nothing
that can shake
my faith about
what happens best
without fear,
When there is nothing.
Wow girlie!
It's nice! A new kind of style for you? (in the way that you set it up, is what I mean.) I liked where you wrote "I can be
who I want to be
at any time
in any day;"
I think that this line is adorable! It's smart, witty, and a line that, I think, whenever someone is questioned about who they are or why they do something, they should be able to say.
Nice write!
<3
Hi hi hi hi halariass!!!
;) you're so funny! Love it! PSML thanks for the kudos ditto friend! :D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Huh? I am mega confused. You
Huh? I am mega confused. You do know that this is what you wrote, correct?
<3
ha
ss you never stop amasing me, i put allen away and brought out bill. still had the cigar and scotch to read this one. although please please make it lines of sight in line 18 the rhyme will still be implyed. <3
It's last life is spent tormenting your dreams-zombie cat
Ok it's done, anything else?
Ok it's done, anything else? Lol! ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
well
yes absolutly make more amasing poems, im not picky about wording or grammer much but that line just kept staring at me :P oh and call me sir if i ask for changes and you do them :P "anything elce sir" would of been halarous
It's last life is spent tormenting your dreams-zombie cat
You know I was going to say sir but it's too british and I
Didn't know if you were a fan sir! ;) shoes on the other foot now! Lol!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
well
absolutly im a fan, what shoes? but i like how you re did the breaks this round also their was a point where you said "in to" not into but i cant find it if you fixed it and i wasnt going to say anything anyway. somethings just make me turn my head when i read them caus i dont want to take away from the poems orignal intent but line of sights made me well lets just say i ate a half pound of chocolate to work of the headach.
It's last life is spent tormenting your dreams-zombie cat
Lol! Good!
I hope you get fat! Bring on the corrections saves me doing it its an integral part of my work, and you know what they say, a builders house is never finished and a mechanics car is never serviced on time so I guess you could say that same goes with my editing rhymes! ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."