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I own your thoughts and how?
I seep in
and crawl about
I lurk
in all the subtle reminders
Screaming imperfection!
I rejoice at being holder of hostages
Named nameless thoughts
thoughts impure and vile
Profanity locked you here in my place.
Like a serpent I slither in
and out of Favor
The hunger to greet
And defeat me
The the jealously guarded quenching
Of your drive to overcome
means you further succumb
Now I sit here watching not
The sentiment is numb.

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This one of those creepy messages... Wonder who what why or when, cause I ain't feeling this. Maybe you know what it's about? Certainly a creepy thought floating out there, whose is it?

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last updated 2 June 2012 - 1:27pm
©2 March 2012 - 10:25pm — SSmoothie
3 March 2012 - 9:10am — snhobo
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sometimes you get a good

sometimes you get a good rhythem to something you're mulling over and it comes out organicly. i think this is an example of that. it flows nicely and nothing seems forced good read

It's last life is spent tormenting your dreams-zombie cat

3 March 2012 - 9:36am — SSmoothie
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Thanks my rhythm is irregular like

My heartbeat ;)

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

2 June 2012 - 1:29pm — SSmoothie
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forgot about this one!

Creepy! Must've been in a darkly creative mood from an unseen influence!

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."