Sleepless in dog town (the game)

Its 3am
craving starts again
So I push that mongrel down
And it starts begging to hang around
I drive off in my car wondering where you are
I cruise past the place I left you
Wondering if your ok too
And it begins again.
lit the blasted fuse.
Like an unlucky lucky coin
I Stupid-sticiously can't stand to lose.
I miss it like a bitch this bastard love
Chasing your shadows in the dark
Has me chasing my tail for your mark
I know this is wrong in every way
And I don't want to stray,
But I still need to know if we're still ok
If its still there, us, our way.
I know I'll always be ok
because you said you love me
I never uttered those cruel 3 words to you
I didnt want to lay a trap and set the spring
But here I am stuck in your vice,
And i can't do a thing
but Search the streets
For a glimpse of you
I need to see that look
In your dark silent eyes
telling me that you love me still,
So that I'm ok,
like you said you always will
But I can't find you...
I need to feel ok
Where are you?
I miss you,
Missing me.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I lost the original due to a drop out :( I was really proud of it but I had to recreate it on the fly... This is I for now...

Yeah I'm trying to realize my faults ain't easy... But at least I'm trying.

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The_Mav's picture

This one is excellent, I love

This one is excellent, I love the imagery and the ideas, the words, so beautiful! Take care -Mav


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thankyou Mav!! I have a

thankyou Mav!! I have a special fondness for this poem, thanks for reading and I look forward to reading your work! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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I need to know if we're still

I need to know if we're still ok , I kike that line . It is line I ask myself alot ..But asking myself If I AM STILL OK ... Loved it great job........


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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I know what you mean and its what essentially i meant

:) this person is very supportive of me and has never ever not been there by choice anyway. this person makes me feel everything is fine because they dont judge me and sometimes I just need to tell the truth about the truth and freely be me. I miss that. it was sooo long ago feels like an eternity away since I last saw them.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

SSmoothie's picture

I don't like rewriting emotional poems after tech stuff ups!Grrr

Still tweaking... But it's getting there.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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And so there it is then...

And so there it is then...


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."