The Promise...

If I could reach in and pull you out of the fog would you seek the sun from then on?

If i could dive down and drag you up to the surface would you promise to swim?

If I could pick you up off the ground would you be willing to stand on your own two feet?

If I offer you my shoulder to lean on would you promise that the tears will turn to joy?

If I could hold you close away from your troubles would you let go of the past?

And if i promise to be there whenever i could would you promise to call me first?

If I made all these promises would you go back to being you, because loving a stranger is so hard to do...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A draft for an idea i have... Stay tuned developing soon! Gee Sir! It was a draft! B)

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snhobo's picture

well

"theo fog"? lolz "If I offer you my shoulder to lean on would you promise that the tears will turn to joy?" this line has inspired me look for a poem that may barow this line if you dont mind. or something near it. great read as alwase


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SSmoothie's picture

Ok Sir, corrected.

Ok Sir, corrected.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

osiriss-'s picture

yes

it's true