Dead tomorrow

I woke up with such excitement I could hardly contain myself!
Tomorrow is the day I die I've been waiting all my life for this,
What should I do today for my last day ever?
I should ride my bike down that hill on stobo street really fast!
only it'll take ages to get up there I don't think I'd last
I could lay in the field on wagamama oval sniffing the cut grass
But that seems too boring for a day that's supposed to be your last,
I could run around and paint the town red literally for my dying art
But if I make that bloody statement my Mother would wilt in shame
I could find the perfect outfit to wear when I go down the six feet,
But it's not the thing I'd care about tomorrow,l'll think of something else,
I can go to the beach and sniff the sea and make the grandest castle
But that would take forever my castles are already waiting for me in the air
I know I'll jump out of a plane to feel the rush of being alive again!
But It seems I left it a little too late, plus I'd rather go with a friend
I could find all of the people I've broken and offer to make amend'
I can't see them all so I write a note it takes too long so I'll just leave a quote
I will see all my friends and relatives and tell them how much they mean to me
It's lunch ime already and breakfast I forgot! Gee this dying tomorrow thing is hard.
I'll eat tonnes of chocolate untill I'm thoroughly sick of it once and for all,
But then I'll be way too sick for tomorrow and for what I must endure.
Nan's come to pick me up to go for our sunday lunch,
the excitement bubbles inside me but I know I mustn't tell
I've made a pact, a solemn vow that tomorrow's the day I set my sorrow free,
We talk of life and love andth future when she was my age was sure would come
Finally the hour passed and I was back at last, pinching my scars under my forearm,
so full of anticipation. My dog scratches at the screen I usually ignore it
Alas I gave in and chased her while throwing bones about the yard.
She made me laugh do hard when she tugged a my jean covered but.
I went down the road and took her for a walk; I ran straight into my ungettable love
Woah, watch where you're going you might hurt yourself! then he looked me in the eye.
H asked if I was ok and I called him a stupid fool. He apologized and offed to buy me a coke.
We sat and we talked for hours as the sun slowly sank, he took. To the ocean and lit a fire,
It was warm we skipped rocks Blythe moonlight an daned by the sea made a castle up. The air,
I felt line I was falling out of the sky and into a pool of happiness i started to cry,
then slowly Rising the Sun made its retun huddled together I was instantly filed with regret
he to me and asked, What would you do if you had only one day left to live?
He answered without my answer and said that If tonight was all he had would die happy
today i whispered please, please don't go I haven't finished living yet!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It's not finished but it's an idea. I won't give it totally away... Ideas welcome!

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Ungettable

a great word, and once gotten, worth living for at least anohter 72 hours :D

ps: Your style has evolved a lot.