Brutal Romance edit

I'm as gentle as the wind after a hurricane hit

My kiss is a twisted promise

 

My warmth a radiating rage

My love is coughed up crimson

The splatters evidence of self sacrifice

My joy is an ironic perversion

My Delicate touch traces incisions

What feats of tender assassinations

I've lined you up sweetly and discretely

Murdered what pride is on display

I move through your envy

I lick the tears like candy

I sleep through my nightmares

I love like I fuck,

And you watch every line,

hoping I'm something different

But I've always been

Exactly what you wanted

And never needed most

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Each facet of your "Brutal

Each facet of your "Brutal Romance" (Eye-catching title. Bravo!) crackles with imagination, passion and prowess.  

 

"My kiss is a twisted promise" Oh, yes!

"My joy is an ironic perversion" Nailed it!

"What feats of tender assassinations" Amazing!

 

"But I've always been

 

Exactly what you wanted

 

And never needed most" Got it! Blazing words.

 

It's always a pleasure to find a new post by you. I can count on being dazzled.

 
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The power of the words you

The power of the words you have chosen, and how you have deployed them, radiaties off the page to a tremendous reading experience.


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