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A name of honour
written in the book of life
alas where is mine?
A simple white truth
A survivour of dark lies
Holds more Weight over time
here are the days now
of an overcrowded world
Seeking to save many
What chance to fumble
What chance to gloriously fail
While struck off the list
What measures could be
What measures could not be
Will they list the best?
Let me count the ways
How many ways do I love?
Too many to count.
Wow! Excellent use of the
Wow! Excellent use of the form. There are some purists (and I am not one of them) who suggest that the Haiku should be strictly about nature with no human value or thought attached to it, simply a response to a moment of observation of some phenomenon of nature. I disagree. Human nature is as appropriate to the form, as you so skillfully prove here, as any other nature. I applaud these Haiku you have written that push the envelope of the form a little further, while also expressing some genuine human observations about ourselves. Bravo!!!
Starward
I whole heartedly agree my
I whole heartedly agree my nature is my nature and indeed nature. We are all one piece of a whole universe and then some...
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."