Suspended

Warm Grazes

smudge your thumb print

across bated lips 

Rolling vapours

Of breath intermingled 

Souls reaching for eachother's atmosphere 

Secret Desires wrapped up

in eachother's hearts 

Beats call out in tandem 

It was only meant to be an innocent kiss 

A hovering of possibilities 

One moment of soft mallowed bliss 

Timid delving lip tips 

A universe of possibilities hung there 

Waiting for tasting 

But lines had already been drawn

across thier stars 

Star crossed 

Eyes locked 

Aniticipation of realising fantasy 

Raging Hopes fade with dawning truths  

And then it hits them

The coming to of senses 

Heart breaking reality 

A crowded room 

Suddenly thrust into

a world of strangers 

Along a forbidden path 

A loveapple left on the vine

Unplucked and overripe

seeping with the juice of if onlys

Oh, what could have been? 

If Eve had been restrained 

And Adam a less jealous fool

As a consequence 

Sweet lips lay bare

a longing pair 

Untasted 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Wasted. 

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darkpool's picture

A loveapple left on the vine

A loveapple left on the vine ...just one of several verses that made me look into myself ... Enjoyed this read much, thank you.

SSmoothie's picture

Thanks darkpool, so good to

Thanks darkpool, so good to see you around here, also wonderful to know that I could resonate in some small way on your frequency  hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

patriciajj's picture

Simply magnificent! I love

Simply magnificent! I love how you froze the moment in mid-passion and evoked a sense of anticipation, leaving us in a dizzying freefall at the end. Now that's talent! I want to quote a favorite line but I can't. This entire deluge of brilliance is a stand-out creation. Bravo! 

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Aww shucks! I am blushing.

Aww shucks! I am blushing. Blessed to have your eyes on my poetry in such an insightful and uplifting way! Always honoured when I see what you have to say. Big hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Pungus's picture

Number One Poem Ever

It is a magically divine triumph and comes together just perfect to form a most favorable scene.


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SSmoothie's picture

Thankyou! I am very honored

Thankyou! I am very honored you think so. Your poetry is amazing! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."