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Suspended
Warm Grazes
smudge your thumb print
across bated lips
Rolling vapours
Of breath intermingled
Souls reaching for eachother's atmosphere
Secret Desires wrapped up
in eachother's hearts
Beats call out in tandem
It was only meant to be an innocent kiss
A hovering of possibilities
One moment of soft mallowed bliss
Timid delving lip tips
A universe of possibilities hung there
Waiting for tasting
But lines had already been drawn
across thier stars
Star crossed
Eyes locked
Aniticipation of realising fantasy
Raging Hopes fade with dawning truths
And then it hits them
The coming to of senses
Heart breaking reality
A crowded room
Suddenly thrust into
a world of strangers
Along a forbidden path
A loveapple left on the vine
Unplucked and overripe
seeping with the juice of if onlys
Oh, what could have been?
If Eve had been restrained
And Adam a less jealous fool
As a consequence
Sweet lips lay bare
a longing pair
Untasted
A loveapple left on the vine
A loveapple left on the vine ...just one of several verses that made me look into myself ... Enjoyed this read much, thank you.
My Secret River
Thanks darkpool, so good to
Thanks darkpool, so good to see you around here, also wonderful to know that I could resonate in some small way on your frequency hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Simply magnificent! I love
Simply magnificent! I love how you froze the moment in mid-passion and evoked a sense of anticipation, leaving us in a dizzying freefall at the end. Now that's talent! I want to quote a favorite line but I can't. This entire deluge of brilliance is a stand-out creation. Bravo!
Aww shucks! I am blushing.
Aww shucks! I am blushing. Blessed to have your eyes on my poetry in such an insightful and uplifting way! Always honoured when I see what you have to say. Big hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Number One Poem Ever
It is a magically divine triumph and comes together just perfect to form a most favorable scene.
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Thankyou! I am very honored
Thankyou! I am very honored you think so. Your poetry is amazing! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."