Misty memories call my name

Take me back to the days of old,

where memories shine of gold,

where moonbeams travel amongst footsteps & thought,

where wandering trance like i am caught,

between the whispers in memories of gold like orbs

where the road of life leads and quickly absorbs,

take me back to the place I saw

Where when I am there I am filled with awe 

A dream upon the mist swirling upon the air

of my atmosphere

wishing I was still there.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Inspired by WordMan 

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Wordman's picture

Inspirations are found where

Inspirations are found where ever our thoughts lead us, I'm happy, and honered, that my simple words fueled your talent. 

Thank you for this wonderful response. 

patriciajj's picture

You had some wonderful

You had some wonderful inspiration! The spellbinding flow set me adrift on this perfect illustration of the power of memories. Hypnotic word choices and a dream-like wordscape. So beautiful. 

S74rw4rd's picture

Beautiful poem with an

Beautiful poem with an excellent rhyme scheme.


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