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The rite of words.
I have a warming glow
coalseced in the pit of my soul
giving rise to more profound insights
that are yet to claim their words.
I pray they do find them similarly
in days yet to come,
but the beats pass unavailed often.
The rite of words – are the right of passage
The rite of words – are the right of passage. The shift, always emanating from the inside out. Be it a boy that becomes a man – or a caterpillar, that becomes a butterfly.
In such a brief set of words,
In such a brief set of words, the Poet expresses both the urge to write and, in that final line, the frustration that sometimes precedes or follows the experience of writing poetry. The poem is a very succinct statement of a very profound and---in the way it is presented, and the language is deployed---very refined perspective. Only a Poet of accomplished experience can make write this way. The novice would be wise, and further educated and guided, by reading this poem.
And thank you for the mention in the note to the poem. I appreciate that very much.
Starward
The poem is Bare Naked where
The poem is Bare Naked where you wrote note and I wrote back. Sometimes people often say I should post my comments as poems some times and so after a while I thought ok, lets see if I find some glints of brilliance... I didn't find brilliance but i found a few yeah, it could work... :) glad you liked the nod. Cheers
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Power packed tightly. Good
Power packed tightly. Good to read you again.
Thanks so much i really
Thanks so much i really appreciate you stopping by and saying so. Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
as they say...build it they
as they say...build it they will come
ron parrish
Take me to church so I can
Take me to church so I can gear the word man! Thanks many hugss and blessingss!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
yeap,you`re welcome
yeap,you`re welcome
ron parrish