A little birdy told me

 

 

He came and rested

like a bird on my shoulder  

Cautiously testing the suitability

and equilibrium of his perch

After a few inquisitive glances,

he seemed to ease.

I let out a slow careful breath...

Then another...

and rather gently built up a rhythm

so as not to startle him

lest he fly away.

And seemingly resolved,

he inched closer

till I could feel the flutter of his breast

and the gentle nuzzling of his head on my ear

My conciousness bade him welcome

such beautiful iridescent blues

straddled his white breast

and piercing blue eyes peered through

a velveteen mask

nestled upon a darkened beak

A striking fellow. 

his weary feet belied his beautiful veneer 

upon closer inspection,

I notice a small part of him missing, 

maybe caught in some fierce struggle for life,

I had enjoyed him fluttering and flitting about weaving such wonderful things with trinkets collected from his travels

There was something ethereal,

yet lonesome in his posture

like that of a wise man

whose trials had marked

the strength of the lines

in his weary well travelled face

but a youthfulness glowed beneath

that smiling eyes could betray in an instant.

It felt like he knew me.

An old friend of the cosmos

that I'd crossed by and by.

And when I dared

and he dared,

our eyes met

and instantly our souls

recognised some ancient promise.

After an endless moment of acquiescence

He began to whisper his mystical wanderings chasing the astral turning of tides.

He whispered ancient mysteries in my ear,

of being lost in endless Odyssey's

revealing our secret truths laid amongst the stars waiting to transform

and reunite in some spectacular way,

some new creation

to flush away the yearning of brighter ways.

I pointed them out to him on the horizon

and I did my best to assure him they were there,

it was then that I spotted that low bow that

broke bare and it hung there

In front of him like a stalking giant,

oh well I whispered

"what's the meaning of existence,

if at least we don't try?"

And off we flew in a different direction

searching for some metaphorical chainsaw

to make for a clearer view.

We couldn't help but feel we were missing something...

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A little inspiration...

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Coincidence

I was going to write a similar poem about a dove, and then I read this soaring success and chuckled, "SSmoothie done beat me to it!"


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Aww thanks but i really think

Aww thanks but i really think you should still write it. I dont have many readers which is perfectly fine with me because I write for me and am happy for all to see a perspective or two, but what if, by some chance maybe years from now you write it and it becomes an anchor point in time of one of the greatest poetic pieces ever written? 

Don't be shy, I wait with bated breath and asurity of you unique flair. Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Hallelujah

I have written it as "The Dove" in my current collection. You are free and welcome to read it. Methinks you might find the similarity of two persons' original thought, ambition (both of you and me), highly interesting. You shouldn't flatter.


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It seems I just may have been

It seems I just may have been right! It is powerful and masterful. Dove has a few very special meanings for me. I'm glad you wrote it hugss  


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."