Personality test- which are you?

 

The truth is out there... 


No, its within. 


Within 3 doors,


Truth is always obedient to its laws


A higher matter, 


That's why it sets you free.


its a prisoner swap


but, there's a fee 


That's why He died for you and me 


And spoke of love and high places 


So that we could all see


What was right in our faces 


The lies and deceptions are out there 


The edges of your cage 


The matchsticks to your rage 


Freeding your demons everyday 


Within in you lies the freedom that you crave 


If only you begin to see the truth inside 


The big save 


You are already free, save the spells cast


Of deception with which you agree


You won't cast them aside 


Until you finally decide 




Come find you,


come see


and maybe together 


We can roam free.  


 

 

 

The truth is out there... 

No, its within. 

Within 3 doors,

Truth is always obedient to its laws

A higher matter 

That's why it sets you free

its a prisoner swap

but, there's a fee 

That's why He died for you and me 

And spoke of love and high places 

So that we could all see

What was right in our faces 

The lies and deceptions are out there 

The edges of your cage 

The matchsticks to your rage 

Freeding your demons everyday 

Within in you lies the freedom that you crave 

If only you begin to see the truth inside 

You are already free, save the spells cast

Of deception with which you agree

You won't cast aside 

Until you finally decide 

 

Come find you,

come see

and maybe together 

We can roam free.  

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Well done! You saw it the others missed it, can you guess why?
Which are you?
Deception is a tricky thing or is it?

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allets's picture

Demon Feeding

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Freedom promised is nice, souls are scorched by the fires of aint got no mind. History will not be kind to us. If love could cure it would have done it by now; 10 thousand years is enough time. We evolved into monsters and were not stopped. Wishes fishes. The age of miacles never was - this is ever and always what we are - before Eve's sin or son, befor Methusela. Sing prophet. Greatest force will end this farce. The sheep will eventually look up. Eye opening rant/warning. ~S~
xoxoxox 


 

 

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That would mean that there is

That would mean that there is no hope, no need for law order just want and need fulfilled hedonistic and dark. I refuse to ignore the lessons and I will fight the demons till the very end even if it means the end of myself. There is more than the grunt of scientific scramble for meaningless connections made meaningful by consensus opinion. "Dont kill the unfathomable God, when the concrete devil kills the joy in you." 

You are more than you believe you could be because what is possible, some semblance of order simply couldn't be if we didn't on some level, compassionately or for necessity agree. Compromise is the ultimate form of love, enlightenment the ultimate quest to be what you want instead of what you are for the greater agapi x hugss always x


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

S74rw4rd's picture

Your words, in this comment,

Your words, in this comment, are extremely profound---and you express great wisdom in such few words.  Bravo!  You should post this as a prose essay, despite its brevity (but it needs no further length in order to work its effectiveness).  I think it could help others reach the clarity that you command in these words.  And years from now, it will still be helping others---that is why I urge you to make this a general post and not just a specific response to a specific comment.


Starward

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Thanks Starward, I'll

Thanks Starward, I'll definitely consider it. Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

S74rw4rd's picture

Thank you for saying so.  The

Thank you for saying so.  The essay brings the point out so well that it should be seen by many more readers than just those who happen to read the comment section for this particular poem.  I think your words could help others!


Starward

allets's picture

In My History Book

Compromise means fewer resources allocated atop fewer allocate resources. At 21 I'd join the rah rah team- at 71 those days are decades past. If I fought a demon, the other demons would laugh. Reading the Holy Quaran - all about Jesus and Moses so far. And the same Biblical admonition - God is, do not seek wealth seek Paradise. Naw, seeking wealth means at 71 you eat good in safety away from the monsters. Good rant value - SEIZE THE TIME! Oh girl! Old age sucks eggs! :D


 

 

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Gosh, i absolutely adore you!

Gosh, i absolutely adore you! You are so darn insightful, and eloquent!  I always always love and think deeply.on your words hugss xo


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."