The tale of one end and another

The kiss of a hand gently traversing through space accidentally enters your atmosphere igniting like a burning meteor flashing through the heart and captured glinting through intent eyes. The moment is locked in infinite time. The knowing was all there was and in that was all. Lives relived a thousand parallels shifting awkwardly through dimensions slipping out of careful designs. Seering promises with infinite eyes. What mischievous cruelty devised that intervenes and devides. endless aeons of living reduced to this one fleeting moment where joy and sadness entwined. Clasping on to the moment of bitter-sweet recognition and failure to move with the grand design, the flickers were all but one, but we'll fight for every one, push against every parallel and every design, to make of it our own eternity of the moment of a lifetime an endless one in as many of our times infinity permits. It is the knowing that sustains us and yet let's us go. But to you this I promised till the end of time. 

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a moment in time captured for

a moment in time captured for ever in our minds


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"The moment is locked in infinite time"

This is great writing. The end's repeated, summarizing unifies all themes flowing throughout. Encore! This is Silkie Ssmooth.

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It always sounds better when

It always sounds better when you say it! Lol! Love ya!hugss xx


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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Smoothie, I adore this feast

Smoothie, I adore this feast of love and wonder! So beautifully encased in your unique poetic genius. Gorgeous! 

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Thanks cascade x hugss 

Thanks cascade x hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am