How I laughed confident like
Founded upon nervous undertones
hoping you wouldn't hear it
I sure gave you a good kick in the guts!
It took my breath away
The way I took yours
Now I watch you as a curiosity sucking for air
Like fish gaping flipping and flopping
in a dried up rock pool
How does it feel?
That sense of suffocation?
I know you think you won't survive
Don't worry, you will...
I can attest to that
Besides we both prescribe to the same idea
And my saviour will save you as your saviour
Will you choke when you have to say our saviour?
Don't worry the blade gets sharper tempered by fire
Trials are for survival and transformation
You'll flip flop and gasp for air but the tide will roll in
And I will drift away and leave you to find your way
But not before the first cut,
The deepest
Is replaced by a scar across my soul
May God have mercy
Because you certainly don't!
Nice Editing
Clarity oozes to the surface of justice :D