Another minute wasted, but savored
lets never leave from this place
it seems an eternity we Labored
To be here in this same space
together after chasing stars and comet tails
running rings around Saturns moons
under and through where the dark holes hail
over and under shifting desert dunes
Looking for me, looking for you
another minute wasted but savored
Now we dance Dance along ultra violet tunes
but us, dastardly luck never favored
to the beat of our hearts croon
looking for me, looking for you
the fabric of the universe once again tears
Nothing left but to rue
it seems it never cares
for me or for you
but hold tight love make this minute last
there’s nothing we can do
time seeps by so fast
loving me loving you
well find eachother again agape
it’s what we were designed to do
I ache another minute through
kiss met love hold on
I promise I’ll find you
promise you’ll find me
lets take this one last breath
together in the same air
and as you’re torn away from me
know eventually I’ll be there
and now as you fade into another oblivion
I’m grateful for those minutes
wasted yet deeply savored
to sustain us
till we meet again.
Your Poems
Are the longest sentences in the world. I looked to find one period, your style places it at the end. Supply your own pauses poetry. "Dance along ultra violet tunes" bye the bye, is exquisitely well honed verse. I enjoy where you go with images like: "...under and through where the dark holes hail..." They just kinda rock is all. ttyl - slc hugz
And who am I to interfear
And who am I to interfear with the way you would like to read my poems? Yes choose your own pauses them read again, choose different ones and read again why not it's yours to infer once I'm done. ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
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Fitzy!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Fitzy!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."