Next to this

 

silence was a welcome relief 

and the darkness seemed like a cosy blanket 

stirrings of after thoughts 

guilt ridden excuses had plaglued the mind 

it has been disowned for a time

knowing only trouble and fast lips 

and quicker hands 

hot cheeks and tepid tears 

feel better away from the light 

scratching doohickey things on the wall for a while in the dark

seemed like the perfectly perfunctory thing to do

so it was done.

 

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Great Ending!

"...hot cheeks and tepid tears..." You have this way with imagery that blows me away! - slc


 

 

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I guess that's just how I

I guess that's just how I think of them I just focus in on the description and the best essence of it no matter how it sounds. Thanks for your encouragement blessings and hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."