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Catch my neurosis
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Mental degrees of separation Joy blossoms where once hope darent tread
what wonderful crossing overs of colours and light
bursting with energy,
traveliing so light underfoot I can touch the stars at whim.
I never knew death could be so beautiful!
Excellence As Writing
M
y neuroses are multi-facited
always at war with my personalities
and father complexes. But, for the most
part, I am as whole and sane
as anyone else dead.
.
:D U no me :D
This is one of those pieces
This is one of those pieces where you flip the poem on its head but in a good way. Direct and powerful without losing its poetic value. Masterful!
Awwwww thanks hugss
Awwwww thanks hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Neuroses
My neuroses are already inside all my writing - unavoidably. The death as beautiful line was a crowning moment for me. Bravo! I shall raise a glass to your neuroses. :D
Ill drink to that! Cheers!
Ill drink to that! Cheers!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."