Catch my neurosis

Joy blossoms where once hope darent tread 

what wonderful crossing overs of colours and light 

bursting with energy,

traveliing so light underfoot I can touch the stars at whim. 

I never knew death could be so beautiful! 

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allets's picture

Excellence As Writing

M

y neuroses are multi-facited

always at war with my personalities

and father complexes. But, for the most

part, I am as whole and sane

as anyone else dead.

.

:D U no me :D

 

 



Onyamaichi

 

INKSTAIN's picture

This is one of those pieces

This is one of those pieces where you flip the poem on its head but in a good way. Direct and powerful without losing its poetic value. Masterful!

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Awwwww thanks hugss 

Awwwww thanks hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Cascade's picture

I love it ! This is brevity

I love it ! This is brevity at it's finest. I love this poem...

...did I say I love it?  lol And the title is fantastic!

SSmoothie's picture

Ha ha! I love that you love

Ha ha! I love that you love it!  Yeah somethings are are dark and beautiful some things are just dark; 0 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

allets's picture

Neuroses

My neuroses are already inside all my writing - unavoidably. The death as beautiful line was a crowning moment for me. Bravo! I shall raise a glass to your neuroses. :D



Onyamaichi

 

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Ill drink to that! Cheers! 

Ill drink to that! Cheers! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am