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Counting stars
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the missing lost in the darkness of your missing
I watch the stars wink as if it's all ok
endless seconds drawl by
lethargic, spiritless
a complete antithesis to my eager waiting
the door does not herald your lively eyes
that hand does not warmly reach for me
that warmth does not envelop me
the soul that sustains me
calls my eyes up to the heavens
a genltle reminder that you are waiting
I wait the endless seconds in passed time
thankful at least, there are enough stars
I came back to revisit this
I came back to revisit this poem, and still find the second stanza both incredibly powerful, and as fresh as if you had written it yesterday.
J-9th94
Eyes of the beholder and
Eyes of the beholder and beholden do not occupy the same exact view ever
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I still miss you xx
I still miss you xx
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thankyou it is a very
Thankyou it is a very personal poem i am profoundly affected when i revisit it. Though it has a very different angle for me than most would take from it. Blessings SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
The second stanza is
The second stanza is incredibly poignant.
J-9th94
Yhankyou very much. Yes that
Yhankyou very much. Yes that last stanza has a vrry evocative element to it. Cheers Ss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I Imagine
Someone dying and their beloveds waiting and counting stars. "enough" is pivotal. This poem touched parts of my Aorta not touched in a long time. Thanks for the sharing - yrpoemchumslc
Love heart and hugss x
Love heart and hugss x
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
touching write !
touching write !
ron parrish
Thanks word man ;) blessings
Thanks word man ;) blessings n hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
my pleasure
my pleasure
ron parrish
So very lonely. So very
So very lonely. So very lovely.
Yes but it wont last the one
Yes but it wont last the one constant is change :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."