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The art of breaking
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The Art of Breaking
The heat of your soft breath
leaves a warmth that makes my skin pine for you
Every hair standing on air charged with desire
Finger tips lace curves and edges
I'm desperately afraid to lose touch
Magnatised hips follow
Arching up to meet your designs
Eyes locked suspended in time
Youre on my frequency
reading every thought,
Unlocked.
Confessions tumble helplessly
Every wish,
Every hope
Every intricate design ive held for us
nothing but surrender
Every wall vapourised
Souls exposed mingling through eachother
Light danced us through aeons of memories
I tore up every star to find you
Kissing the footprints I followed as markers
You saw it all
Every desperation
Every hopless call
Endless pits of lamentation
A Tortured seperation
A pain to rival all pain
And still it wasnt enough
To forgive me.
You stood one moment longer than the last time
i almost felt you let me in
I clung desperately to the cliffs of hope
As you picked away my fingers
And blew me a kiss before the fall.
A shattering thud was the door of your heart
Closing upon my breaking.
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Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I have my moments
A vast library of mp3s and an eclectic taste in music.
Helps enhance the variety of my writing styles.
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
You saw it all
And I was trying to break your fall
And you were right there
When I sent the call
And now I'm lying here
Broken down
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
As always you Rock RoC great
As always you Rock RoC great to see you on :) perfect song how do you find them? :) Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
You stood one moment longer
You stood one moment longer than the last time
i almost felt you let me in
I clung desperately to the cliffs of hope
As you picked away my fingers
And blew me a kiss before the fall.
I enjoyed the entire thing but this part I read over and over again it really struck me and made the whole piece come together. That was some enticing writing SS.
Long days and pleasant nights
Diamond
Awww thanks diamond ♡ great
Awww thanks diamond ♡ great to read ur stuff again too! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Awww thanks diamond ♡ great
Awww thanks diamond ♡ great to read ur stuff again too! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Yes. I liked this one very
Yes. I liked this one very much for its heightend drama. Good penning!
Awwww thanks Inky been too
Awwww thanks Inky been too long! Where have you been? Going to see if you have any new poetry :D cheerSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
A Dramatic Write
I got stuck on the hope cliffs, paused, read it three timed, then was shattered by the finale. Whew is my new abbreviation for you hit me hard with that ending. Oh! The reality! The way it felt! Xoxox & hugz
~ Lady A ~
Ooooh when you say it like
Ooooh when you say it like that i cant help but write again! Thank you for taking the time to read my heart farts i really appreciate you and adore your wisdom wit and art of arts hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I've Noticed
There are a lot more poets in summer. School is out, may be the cause. Glad you are posting. It feels good to write with the writers. ~ Lady A ~
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