I miss the days i remember when...

I need to write soul letters to the universe

I ache at the words fallen from my mind uncaught and dissolved 

off to the wind in someone else's verse caught by seredipity's pen

I rue the day again and again. 

a tip of a finger touch brings words of solace needed so much

my desperate hours go unrecited 

my journey to overcome unoted.

 

I miss the days when it all gushed out

when the words fell on the page just right!

Jumping on stars and diving blackholes

 hopping on the sun and swinging on the moon

I wrote to pass the time 

I caught every drop, every tension 

but fallen a long way off from respective creation

Oh I miss the days, miss the days when you were all my needed inspiration.

a thought and a memory collected for all time

slip through empty fingers 

 

a lost verse or clever rhyme

i fade a little more each time 

dont let me slip away with those lines

catch them theyre falling down again

I cant find the pieces!

how can I start again?

 

dear universe, I fucked up 

help! 

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

oh whatever. just remember I miss you, I miss this place

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Despite hardly getting in to

Despite hardly getting in to pp anymore on account of being so busy I have still managed to scribble out 67 works of poetry or poetic writings. Not too bad after all I thought it was only about 25- 35 max. That's an average of 5 poems a month. 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

running_with_rabbits's picture

OMG

or the days where you paused people mid kiss to write the poem about the kiss?!?!?!?! YES! I miss those too! what gives? why aren't we writing more?

 

also, I enjoyed this, but I wish the first line ended at "write my soul a letter" 

 

<3 missed ya!


Much Love

Ashley

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For dear rabbit you can start

For dear rabbit you can start it that way if you want - yes mid kiss... oh to write a gushing Geiser of emotion, savior the write because before the ink dries on your life you will become a miser... saving pennies of thoughts for the hereafter. Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

allets's picture

Those Last 2 Lines

ROCKED! - allets 


 

 

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Yes, me to my core I don't

Yes, me to my core I don't usually admit when I'm wrong ;). Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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I hope you find inspiration

I hope you find inspiration again. I too miss the days when it was easier

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Thanks Mr Poofs glad to see

Thanks Mr Poofs glad to see you're back! How goes it all? 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Things are ok. Livin the

Things are ok. Livin the hospital life, trying to fix this path in shambles. girlfriend broke up with me, so kinda sad. Idk what to do now. Miss my pops yo. Wrote a bit about those two things if you care. How you be?

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to be pulled from the silence

to be pulled from the silence that is broken by your words
and revel in the outpouring only your pen can cause
I felt the tortured poets whispers in my ear
leaving a twinge of absolution through the outpouring
sentiment felt
to feel the light seeping outward from between cracks
of darkness
a warmth that lulls my demons back to slumber
rave on tortured poet

I see your aurora in the words written


~ D D~


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

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Funking wow!! You are an

Funking wow!! You are an awesome writer! Love you twisted Bro,  love your work too!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am