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The Phoenix Knows When...
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I'm Bigger Than Ben Hur! She came to me in the eyes of a child,
Blazing a warning!
Shelling out new hopes as if they were endless.
She flood my veins with a burning sense of invincibility
Clarity stricken,
the glug of decomposing viscous opaqueness
Melts into warm throbs
flushed with the fluidity of vinegar through saline truths
Death is a fools comfort,
A nothingness in mind, body and soul.
I caught a light!
Seered into renewal
Through the birth of a new day,
With new hopes,
A new vision,
A future so bright!
Burning with beauty
She has once again baptised my eyes
With a new fight,
Written in all the colours of her light.
Whoa this is intense.
Whoa this is intense. Spiritual awakening on the rise?
Thanks Mr poofs looking time
Thanks Mr poofs looking time no see., missed you!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Looked like a welcome 2016 poem Respected SS
Death is indded a fool‘s escape
To live with all is life
©bishu
I suppose it could be bishy!
I suppose it could be bishy! But it's a 'OK, I got this. A it no one gonna pin me down.if they do, I'm going down fighting! It's a big flip of the bird to anone who counts me out including myself! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I suppose it could be bishy!
I suppose it could be bishy! But it's a 'OK, I got this. A it no one gonna pin me down.if they do, I'm going down fighting! It's a big flip of the bird to anone who counts me out including myself! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Hello
Fantastic writing here Smoothie, there's a lot going on in the
authors voice. Your strength is felt through your words.
Although Free verse is not my thing, I was captured and
you managed to keep me reading start to finish . . Wanting more.
Anyway thanks for this. Best wishes to you.
Thanks silver, that means a
Thanks silver, that means a lot because I really love your style and verse. I relate to most of it. I was a rhyming and structure junkie especially in my early days. Now I write when and as it comes and tweak as I go :) might just do one to get the rusty brain mechs moving again! hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Im looking forward to read it
Judging by all the work I've read of yours.
I really enjoy the power and the images you
Create. Truth and getting to the point with emotions I can
actually feel. So allow me to hold you to a Smoothly
written rhyme. Nice talking with you. I've just been inspired
to write something without an edge. thx and ill be reading you
This Poem Is Exceptional SS :D
"...the fuidity of vinegar in saline thoughts..." is the reason I read SS the ONE. Bravo for an excellent compostion. Love and Hugz - Stella
Thanks Stella, lol but I
Thanks Stella, lol but I just changed it to 'vinegar through saline truths '. Should I change it back? I sincerely Vale your opinion on this one hugss
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Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I like "through"
went back to edit my comment but editability is expired. Through and truths are homophones - sharing the same vowel grouping/tones. Through is excellently selected. - Stella -
love & prayers
Extraordinary Edit
It works! ~(:D)- hugz - Stella
You have to fight
While you are alive.
There ain't no fighting
When you are Dead.
KS
Yes you do she always comes
Yes you do she always comes to me when I need her most hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I don't know who She is
But I see you took one of the fights
Out of your poem.
Sometimes when people comment
It can seem strange when someone
Changes the poem.
I like it anyways and I would never tell someone
What to do with their poem.
KS
Yeah, I get you. But 7th want
Yeah, I get you. But 7th want readers to enjoy the sentiments. It's important to be innovative but also reachable. What do think works better kS? In or through ? Asking opinions I can decide :) hugs. Which fight taken out? Just for clarification mwah! Much love and respect :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Smoothes
I taut I seen a puddy cat.
I don't know.
Your making me think to much.
It's OK anyway you want it.
KS