It hit me like a lightning bolt,
straight through the heart!
I don't want to be here anymore.
At all.
Time to spread my wings
Gonna perch my self high
upon the mountain of trash I deal with
And look for a clean fresh start.
Open the doors to risk and flight,
where fancy has a chance to reign
I'm working towards a bright new light
From the inside out
Going back from crazy to sane
Going to blind those mother fuckers and fly!
astonishing myself with
The realisation of why the fuck I didn't do this sooner!
Why the fuck why!?
Trying to help them out all this time
What a fucking fool am I?
Ungrateful user cunts.
Respected SS you ....
have put firecrackers on the mxxxrxckxxd && lit them I believe everone sometimrs feels like this
©bishu
Damn! So much animosity! Rage
Damn! So much animosity! Rage on smooth. Cunts be trippin
Work is full of ....
I think because life is so opressive in any industry or business; these endeavours should be manned by androids, that won't mind the repetativeness, heavy work, and absolute tiedium. And unfortunately this is how most bosses feel compelled to run things; whilst using mere humans. People always turn in against themselves and need a scapegoat to take it out on. It is not good to be taken advantage of; I really felt rather sorry for your character in this poem.
I am sure this "down" experience when scrutizied brought about the determination to do better by his self and good. Great poem; it reminds me of some places I have worked. Uck!!
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
The Real SSmoothie
Rants again
Like only smoothie girl could
KS
as a waitress...
i wish the fuckwits at my job were self serving... lol
excellent write, i look forward to watching you rise like a phoenix out of the ashes of torment.
I'm looking forward to it as
I'm looking forward to it as well, I've been reading your stuff and I am a fan :) I don't have time to comment much but I do read as much as I can. I do try to make sure I try to keep up with pp buddies but there's so many great ones if they aren't on the front page or in comments I tend to miss them unless I search their folder. Keep up that great writing I love your style. And your pen name.:) thanks cheers so
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
:)
i know what u mean. i've had more spare time than usual lately, so i've been catching up on reading poetry. tjere's so much awesome stuff out there!!
Retired
YES! I've felt and heard and witnessed so much (dare I say crap) in the workplace I got a tough skin and mostly ignored the sideline drama fest. Fly SS, fly! If only a dream with no real risks, dream on! This poem was my work career mostly - helping but no appreciation, just a paycheck - humans, gotta love 'em! ~Stella~