Sentiments in the key of moonlight sonatas

Star lights flash across the sky,

I feel beautiful

Enveloped in a sense of wonder 

Bathed in Moonlight 

Peaks and valleys rise from the playful motions of our bodies 

All my senses ignited

The way the soft light hits your eyes

the warmth and ease of your smile

The perfect weight of your touch 

To be guided by your hand 

Taken by my soul

and led to indescribable pleasures

Unspeakable love thread like a needle through desires

The glassy lake shimmers  

The cool soft grass hugs gently 

The fragrant air hovers lightly 

Sweet breaths mingle as did our lips midnight kisses 

Speaking in silence every tender regard 

Filling Every silent need 

The exquisite trails of

Loves dashing arrow

Weaving us closer 

Invisible lovely thread 

Unbreakable 

As the heart that refuses to love.

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bishu's picture

Dear Respected SS Lovely feeling !!!

While studying / reading this poem I was floating on a rubber raft without oars drifting "merrily" under the milky moonlight without any cares or worries in the world. I could hear my own breathing gazing lazily at the stars..... Be well Respected SS & be happy Smile


©bishu 

 

SSmoothie's picture

I always think of you when

I always think of you when inspired by the beauty of the soul bishy thank you xx hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

mrpoofs's picture

Nice! So elegant this is.

Nice! So elegant this is. Always great to read a Smoothie

SSmoothie's picture

Thanks Mrpoofs :) I smile

Thanks Mrpoofs :) I smile that I can write elegantly I'm such a long way from it I'm a pretty earthy, raw and spiritual character hugs 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

justanotherscreename's picture

Love being as thread. If

Love being as thread. If nothing else, you have given inspiration, and that alone is enough.

SSmoothie's picture

It's the only way I can

It's the only way I can describe the fabric of the journey,  so mimes the stich is loose, sometimes too tight, and often  mostly perfectly perfunctory :) thanks hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Anretsuhn's picture

Interesting love poem.

By the way you separate tags

with, commas, like, so

It's helpful to have them put it correctly.

Anyway, nice poetry or song like I said. Romantic.


 

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SSmoothie's picture

Thanks I got lazy will fix up

Thanks I got lazy will fix up those hash tags soon! #hashtagneeded


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

allets's picture

Flames, Hot, Leaping Leaping!

Somebody call the fire department and put this fire out! - Too many favorite lines (thread rocks) - bravo! & BRAVO!!!! ~Lady A~

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SSmoothie's picture

When you say it my soul

When you say it my soul dances I side my body!hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."