Its not beautiful

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Its not beautiful

beaten

breathless

bruised

broken

torn

tattered

stiched up 

resuscitated

and

resuscitated again

...

that was the function

of her heart.

to be pulled to pieces 

Or pushed back in together again

...

 

and still she managed 

the miracle of love.

 ...

 

her love was

unconditionally blind

but the strong quiet

beautiful kind

that no one thought

beautiful at all.

 

 

A perfectly perfunctory love.

 

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Diamond_Wills_New_War's picture

In my opinion the broken and

In my opinion the broken and the beaten have more potential to be beautiful then those that we may view as flawless. It's cliché, but I think we love others for their scars and imperfections. It's getting to know that other person who in one way or another is just as fucked up as you, but somehow it makes you love them more. Anyway great poem SS. Cheers and hugs.


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

SSmoothie's picture

Hey DW! I wish everyone had

Hey DW! I wish everyone had your opunion! Wouldnt that be something different? I like my love as dark as it is light and plenty of colours as well as monochomatic. I guess id get bored if I didnt have something to compete with? This Crazy little big thing called love...


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

SSmoothie's picture

Awwww thanks my lovey wonderments

Thats so beautiful to hear. I am often too busy to repay the time to write a note but I promise,  I do try :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Unseen.warfare's picture

I've never told you I like

I've never told you I like your writing. I guess now would be a good time. 

 

 

SSmoothie's picture

Oh gee thanks so much! just

Oh gee thanks so much! just saw this. Blessings I very much appreciate you saying so hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Anretsuhn's picture

Yes it is.

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allets's picture

INDEED!

I like yr stuff too - as u no :D ~allets~

perfunctory? lovely.