When I close my eyes to dream again...
I visit my dreams at night...
I see you.
The shadow that follows me through the day...
At the first sign of darkness...
I feel you.
When the air becomes so shallow,
And its weighting down on my chest...
I breath you.
Sitting alone in the room...
Staring at the empty wall,
I feel you watching.
Soaking up my pillowcase...
When the pain creeps to me,
I look into the dark...
I hear you.
Your whisper teased my mind
Your breath stole mine,
When I am alone...
You are around.
intersting... really your poetry shows me that you are a good and realistic and logic based poet... and the ideas and subjects are enough new and the way you do it is fantastic... yeah I mean it and love this piece of poem very much..and hope my poetry will also touch your heart if go through seriously..and let me know if its ok to your taste of soul...