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Gum and glue
Your memories appeared again in my dreams,
you created my most feared nightmares
Preventing myself from moving on,
Just because of those horrid actions,
I'm trapped in the undesired darkness
Forbidden pain rage among my thoughts
Anger burn in the soul of my heart
Mixing up the pain I wish not to see,
What you've done burns in my mind.
Digging deep into my thoughts
I'm lost because of you,
Your actions ruined my past, my memories.
Past memories slowly creates future nightmare.
Poem reads very dark and mysterious, but it succeeds in bringing forth the designs of an extremely profound emotional experience. The wording is good, and quite atmospheric in a telling, and moving way. "Forbidden pain rages among my thoughts...Anger burn in the soul of my heart" concludes a morbid, yet stable effect. Overall, I would have to say that this is a very moving entry, and truly comes across as a wonderfully impressive, and highly creative piece.
new_wave_franky
July 26, 2009.