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Anxiety
Its been so long, this silence is saving me.
All most years since I felt my sanity.
This whole time, my heart, it beats.
It beats inside of me, as the day repeats.
Save me, only you can.
Lend me your empty touch, so we can fly again.
You know I've never felt this alone,
Its been so long, since my heart beats on its own.
I've been looking for so long.
Just to find you and be so wrong.
Save me, only you can.
Lend me your empty touch so we can fly again.
Its been so long, this silence is saving me.
Almost years since I felt my sanity.
I need you here more, need I mention?
Baby, it kills me to know your true intention.
As a really deep writer of emotions myself, I can truly relate to this. So much confusion...yet still a trace of love's passion. It also hints upon desire. However....I feel the last line really tells it all. "Baby, it kills me to know your true intention." This line describes well the infedility of the matter. It tells the reader the dire aspects of the situation. I like the way you set it up, Kate. The way you led the poem into that final conclusion. I like the way in which your poetry tells me that you understand what real poetry is all about. Keep up the good work, Kate.
new_wave_franky
August 5, 2009.
I just have to comment on this one too, it communicates your feelings so well. I've felt similar lately. I really enjoyed this one as well.