Counting Boxcars

 

She was on the veranda

counting boxcars

in my boxers

with her heals, up against

the wall

 

Smiling gently into the night

with a Dunhill

on her lip,

 

and a cold perspiring drink,

sweating

on the rattan end table

 

It was only a few minutes

before midnight,

but she had already established

her summer routine

 

No school, no lessons

no ratty kids,

No reason to care

 

Just two weeks in,

to her

fuck the world routine

 

She could hardly lift her eyelids

when I saw her,

 

She was already, eight or nine

tonics

into the evening

 

when I came home.

 

Was that twelve,

or

One hundred

and

Twelve,

 

She asked.

 

I must have fallen

asleep,

She mumbled

half

coherently;

 

I was counting boxcars,

while I waited

for you

to come home.

 

Was that twelve,

or

One Hundred and twelve,

 

She wondered.

 

There was a heavy rumbling

across the river

 

A kilometer long train of boxcars

was

passing by.

 

But none of us knew,

 

how many had

passed.

 

 

~/~

 

 

 

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I am becoming quite impressed

I am becoming quite impressed by the metaphorical meanings you draw from railroad equipment.


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part of the soul

 

Trains have always been a part of my life, one way or another.

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Oh the fun... without sheep

Oh the fun... without sheep count boxcars! I was half expecting a riling morality narrative from the famed Boxcar Kids type novels. 12 or a 112 at midnight!  Good choice for posting. And quite honoured at such graciousness. A success in putting together a railroad element with many other elements and themes so they interplayed intuitively.


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Good Summer Fun

 

Gin & Boxcars… it’s a hell of a summer pastime.