She was on the veranda
counting boxcars
in my boxers
with her heals, up against
the wall
Smiling gently into the night
with a Dunhill
on her lip,
and a cold perspiring drink,
sweating
on the rattan end table
It was only a few minutes
before midnight,
but she had already established
her summer routine
No school, no lessons
no ratty kids,
No reason to care
Just two weeks in,
to her
fuck the world routine
She could hardly lift her eyelids
when I saw her,
She was already, eight or nine
tonics
into the evening
when I came home.
Was that twelve,
or
One hundred
and
Twelve,
She asked.
I must have fallen
asleep,
She mumbled
half
coherently;
I was counting boxcars,
while I waited
for you
to come home.
Was that twelve,
or
One Hundred and twelve,
She wondered.
There was a heavy rumbling
across the river
A kilometer long train of boxcars
was
passing by.
But none of us knew,
how many had
passed.
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I am becoming quite impressed
I am becoming quite impressed by the metaphorical meanings you draw from railroad equipment.
J-Called
part of the soul
Trains have always been a part of my life, one way or another.
Oh the fun... without sheep
Oh the fun... without sheep count boxcars! I was half expecting a riling morality narrative from the famed Boxcar Kids type novels. 12 or a 112 at midnight! Good choice for posting. And quite honoured at such graciousness. A success in putting together a railroad element with many other elements and themes so they interplayed intuitively.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
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Good Summer Fun
Gin & Boxcars… it’s a hell of a summer pastime.