Trout Fishing for Souls

 

An early day in the river

before dawn,

the sun just cresting

over the hill

 

A pair of ravens croak

in a high Oak,

calling down ancient ancestors

as waters swirl

 

The sun is peeping over

a craggy rock,

but the shadows are still long

over the stream

 

Evaporation fog floats like

a thin veil,

whispering to the sleepy

morning trout

 

I too, hear the whispers

of the past;

a lifetime of forgotten faces

lost to time

 

Their spirits have come down

to join me,

waste-deep in the swirly swirl

of mountain water

 

Cold waters coil round

a fallen elm;

something lurks below

a rolling swell

 

The first warm touch of sun

now high

in the ravens’ oak,

I remember my brothers’ smile

 

I have not departed, I am here

in your heart;

Here in the sunlit ripples, I hear

him say

 

I am here too, let me fly

with you,

beats my heart

in a bellowed, burned-out prayer

 

There is no hunger here,

I hear;

But it’s not your time,

the waters say

 

And there, just then

a wind

dipped into the vale

 

And a glorious rainbow

jumped

into the air

 

upon my hook

 

~/~

 

 

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An excellent Poem!  Superb! 

An excellent Poem!  Superb!  And I say again, SUPERB!!!  The imagery is precise and evocative and conveys the emotion well.  From a lesser poet, or a wannabe, this could have been a melodramatic mess; but, in your words, it is precisely, succintly, and elegantly stated.  This is a fine achievement.


I am bookmarking this on my PC.  I want to be sure to revisit it again.


J-Called

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Thanks again

 

Thank you once again for the kind words. I will put them in my pocket for a rainy day.

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Thank you for the reply.  The

Thank you for the reply.  The poem is very impressive, and continues to be marked on my bookmark page as a favorite.  Thanks again for posting it.


J-Called

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the kind of things I try to understand

 

It has a lot of meaning to me too Starward. These are the kind of things I try to understand in life.