Of flesh & time

 

I’m lying beneath a crab apple tree

reading Proust

 

A bell rings in the distance

but I do not hear

 

I’m lost in a place untouched by time

 

I lye awake

on a bed of cold autumn grass

with leaves

made ready of gold

 

The distance is not too far

from my Merovingian

past

 

Time springs forth to swallow me

in the afternoon light

 

I am in

my place of peace

 

There is no space or time

between us,

only chocolate-vanilla swirls

and mending holes

of

forgotten places

 

The church bells go unheard,

everything

is falling into the vortex

 

I know this moment

will not

be found again

 

The gold trinkets are falling

all around

 

Sweet October treats made pure by sun

and rain

and let loose by wind, to whirl on earth

 

The days are casting longer shadows now

growing ever larger,

as I approach the final pages

 

My mind is mingled with printed word

 

It is imparting a new meaning

to the falling leaves

 

One I caught mid-air

and kept

before it touched

the ground

 

It is my gesture to anyone around

that Crimson Kings

are loved

 

Cold, swollen and alone

I met her flesh,

which flash-warmed and dried

my damp feelings

 

Proust would surely agree

that this moment

belonged

to me

 

Every detail of his room

not

to be forgotten

 

forever engraved, every detail, every morsel

every scent

still tasty and alive

for all eternity

 

as I closed my book to make love

on the cold grass

 

the Swann's Way

 

 

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Oh, what can I say about such

Oh, what can I say about such volcanic streams of language? I almost don't want to touch this with my humble analysis, but I'll try. It bustles with so much emotion and yet, miraculously, stands still in a beautiful, beautiful encasement of transcendental peace. 

 

First, you led us to a state of flow where there is no difference between past, present and future, and there, under a sprinkle of "gold trinkets" and surrounded by imagery that is deep meditation, you surged into a delicate and subtle encounter that burned brighter than any detailed description. 

 

The ending is so magnificent that I'm silenced with awe—

 

All I know is that I crossed a bridge between body and soul and it's perfect here. 

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I dance along with you

 

I’m always so incredibly warmed, the way you move through words so effortless. Meditative and soulful, you gather the chords and dance hypnotically. And like a troubadour of old, I want to strum along… and dance along with you.