You had me at petal
though I had
my foot
on the pedal,
and couldn’t slow down
So I leaned into my finest
tempest stride
to catch up
to you
But I tripped over my own
shoelace,
and floundered for
a moment
Because I was tripped
by your
persuasive melody
Till I found a thousand
secrets
tucked under my pillow
Silent, alive, and dreaming
like that
brilliant northern aurora
kept
quietly cloaked under the quill
of your clavicle
And me – that Eastern Screech Owl
that spoke
from the dark,
with his eyes dilated with admiration
Discovering I had something
strange,
written in my throat
It was a love song,
written
on a wafer
That I suddenly found in my pocket
~/~
Poetic bookends—both stunning
Poetic bookends—both stunning in their symbolic imagery and beautiful flights of language. I love where the inspiration took you in this counter piece and nod to a great poetess' voice and style, and it's so encouraging to witness such support between two excellent wordcrafters. Thoroughly enjoyed this strikingly clever work.
This is a good poem.
This is a good poem.
J-Called
Drawn from the misty blue Aether
Drawn from the misty blue Aether – between Notes & Mediocrity, written by Cascade.