Granted for taken
Greed by the swallowed
Injustice of smell
Shell out hollowed
Remains up broken
Heals that don't scar
Spoken never words
Ok from being far
Situation the understanding
Help a little needing
Myself again by here
Hating the feeding
Reminded I am constantly
Hearing of sick
Memories by wounded
Pain the lick
...Late it's too now
This is very good...I loved the way you changed common phrases around...you are very talented...keep up the good work!!!
cant say much more then that this is awe-ing. induced shivers down my spine. and kickstarted my heartbeat a bit. wow...you are the goddess of poetry in my eyes.