slave ship

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innocence

I saw a glimpse of light

through the creaking boards

that the white men hadnt covered

underneath their floor

I saw the light creep through

tempting to me come near

whispering "hey you

lets get out of here"

a thought came across my mind

and made me jump with glee

thinking that i could escape

and maybe id be free!

but sadly the white men came

and covered the floor

closing off all the hope and light

here i am sore foverevermore

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i think the better of my racial abuse poems critique plz!

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Can understand your poem... on a trip to South Africa felt extreme pain to read Mahatma's mind expressed through his book about his doubts whether to fear the white man sitting next to him or fight for his dignity...
These were put up at the station of the showdown in SA by spoornet ...
I feel it is never late for a reconciliation from the bottom of the heart and just not as if lip service from a podium...