You deny your beauty
You deny your talent
You deny your creativity
Everything that is great about you
You deny
A beauty that is
To me, unparalled
Your talent and creativity
That I love to explore
Immerse myself in
And become lost in
You deny
You deny your importance
And almost, your existence
And you deny
Me.
January 19, 2003
that was great....it makes me think of what my ex boyfriend could've said to me...and it hit really close to home...good job
A bit difficult to read without punctuation marks. However, I read it 3 times and found it very intriguing. A very in depth piece.
I read your poem "Deny" and really "felt" it. I felt I knew exactly where you were and what you were thinking. I'm glad PostPoems sent it out as a "Daily Random Poem."
Great job! I really like this poem!
Keep writing!
^_^
A intresting peice here and one i can very much relate too
James Darr Author of Poetry's New Leash On Life
I love this poem as you can tell its true for alot of people. you've really captured how everyone, in one way or another, feels.