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thank you (you shouldn'd have)

I wan't another day

redone with invisable memories

to replace what was

i need more to work with

you've given me nothing

thank you-

if I can erase some words

to fill in the blanks

maybe you'd give me something

anything

thank you

you shouldn't have

you really fucking shouldn't have.



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last updated 12 October 2010 - 3:52am
©16 July 2008 - 8:13pm — solidsarcasm
16 July 2008 - 8:37pm — Jewel Phoenix (not verified)
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I really loved reading this, no words are wasted, you really feel and connect with what's written. Excellent.

1 September 2015 - 3:32am — allets
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Awesome Rant

U made my week with this write ! Great poem ~allets~

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