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What is it you're scared of?
Fearing the unwritten future?
Holding onto the past?
A door
I feel you want opened
Unwilling you are
What we have...
Could be so special and pure
The potential is there
A key
I don't have
To unlock the door that guards your heart
Standing out in the cold
Where I'll wait
For how long?
I don't know...

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©21 May 2012 - 3:42pm — solace_hero
25 August 2012 - 7:13pm — twiztid_girl_
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I agree with everyone above,

I agree with everyone above, this evokes some great feelings. You could say, I've been there...

1 August 2012 - 1:24pm — battlepink
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I enjoyed this very much!

I enjoyed this very much!

19 June 2012 - 8:29am — MissSaigon
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A Fiercely Strong, Yet Beautiful Imagery

I love the imagery that I made in my head from such amazing words you composed together.

11 June 2012 - 12:38am — edge_of_existence
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Very nice, very nice indeed...

And such a strong image. Excellent job

This life is the "once upon a time" kind of fairy tale that will sold to the masses 2000 years after it ends