I was strong when I had no friends
I was strong despite their cruel words
I was strong tho they always made me cry
I was stronger than they ever could have guess
Back then I was stronger
Even tho totally alone, I was happy
Their evil intentions hardly phased me
But now i'm simply pathetic
A weak lil black-coated, premature kitten
Now that I have friends, I am weak
Now that I hear kind words, I am weak
Now even tho I can no longer shed any tears, I am weak
Now that I am depressed and suicidal, I'm so phucking weak
I was full of hope, dreams, and aspirations
Now i have none of these, nor do I care
I am nothing, jus an empty shell of my old self
Good bye to the old me
Good bye to the new me
Good bye to everything
As much as that's about suicide, I like it...I just like the way you worded it so neatly. But maybe you were/are weak because you thought it wouldn't matter to anyone if you killed yourself. Now that you realize that people do care about you, you don't know what to think...Aye? Keep writin, chick, and thanks for all of your critiques for me...you're the only one who seems to read them anymore. ::Hug:: For good measure...