Tripped into the world
Stumbled towards
Fell into the richness
Deepened color
Your face inches away
I could taste
Sweet
Love has tempted me once again
Could I?
Conjure this
Glare
Capture the attention
Of the world
Anticipating
The words to fall onto my tongue
A fragrance that lingers
A memory
Of a dream
I once had
Of
you
I can truly relate to this poem. Made my heart skip a beat.
Thank you.
breath taking
and sweet :*D .
A very vivid and powerful rendering. Somehow (to me), you've managed to make a smooth rhythm from a rather dischordant series of lines. The result is all the more effective, I think. Great poem.