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My savior
Where could my savior be?
Tears keep flowing
Drifting me further away from where I want to be.
I guess I brought it upon myself.
All those years of loving and but never caring.
I guess that’s why I suffer
The reasons shouldn’t make a difference
If she was to show herself
We could love one another
Until the nights were nevermore
And the days, dreams of violet fields…
But I sit atop these dark waters a drift by myself.
I need that smile
To remove all that haunts me.
Each one of those ghost
Walk right by me, taking a piece of me.
Each piece she will never have.
It’s not looking good down here.
My love…
My dear…
My savoir…
I will pray now.
But, not to you…
But to me.
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The secret is finding that love inside of you. So in the end of your poem, it makes sense to me that you should pray to yourself for only you can save you. --------------------------------- This reminds me of a joke: A man was in a ship wreck and he was stranded at sea with only a life saver. Another boat passes by and the people inside the boat yell "here here let me save you". The man says "no God will save me" So the boat leaves. Then a helicopter flies overhead and they throw the rope down and say "here here let me save you" The man says "no God will save me" Then the Coast Guard passes by and the same thing happens. Finally the man drowns and when he gets to heaven he asks God; "Why didn't you save me from drowing?' And God replys, What do you mean? I sent you a boat, a helicopter and the Coast Guard! --------------------------------- Keep writing man..the answer is out there. Didi
This is a great poem especailly the shift of focus in the last line. Really good work, and oh by the way, really good photo too. Geneva
you have a way to capture individual repsonsibility and helplessness all at the same time, while recognizing the need for the comfort of others. often when i read poetry i feel that it leans towards one side, either too much reliance on others or too much independence, and rarely is there a nice blend of both concepts working together. before i ramble off to a tangent... you've captured the best of the worse in both worlds...