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A Pleasurable Moment
Taking the chains off their hooks
Gathering the remains of the last
Holding down on the appendages
Gripping the torso…
Straps against flesh…
Chains against wood…
Heightened sense of hearing
As the cloth takes hold of your sight
You feel the presence
But still you can never know…
Tighten your fear
I ask, “does it hurt?”
Pointed objects pierce your soul
“Can you handle it?”
“Are you helpless?”
I lie down next to you…
Running through your mind
I wait…
Knowing that I have you and
Will take you away from it all
You will never feel a thing
I promise.
This poem is unique in my reading experience.
Starward
neat poem
That's a nice Poem...intense...and imaginative...sp?
Johannah
I must say that this poem is really violent and scary!! But good nonetheless, I agree with my lover's views on your talent... cheques in the mail!!
WoW! The emotions that I feel at this moment are undefinable. I like this poem very much. I have to read your poem again and send another critique.
Hello Steve, I sense the meaning of the words in your poem are very strong. I feel you could have added more, and enhanced upon your thoughts...beautifully written, :) and is powerful. I like it very much... Norella Rolek
bondage is cool :) (great work :))
this is such an interesting read..... I really liked this one.... what a treat ..... to have someone here that will work our thoughts..... well done
This is pretty intense. The writing is really incredible, once again. The subject, my interpretation is either death or S&M? If it is s&m subject that is very wild and scary but erotic at the same time. Hey, will you shoot me out an email and let me know? Great writing- Thrilling, even.