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sex drive
what drives you on
what sets your pace
is it your heart
is it the chase
do you defend
or do you deny
its my choice
no, not that guy
who drives your life
not who but what
is it your head
or that big ol butt
you know what i'm sayin
yeah--thats right
i think you got it
my words are tight
some of you know
others know not
i'm talkin about sex
not a burial plot
its called sex drive
that carnal urge
everyone has it
let your sin be purged
some drive early
like me, its late
not here just yet
not on my plate
i drive me on
i set my pace
it is my heart
someone give chase!
i drive me on i set my
i drive me on
i set my pace
it is my heart
someone give chase!
Firstly your flow in these stanza's seem to settle so naturally, that and your ability to splice that with a rhyme scheme so well prepared it seems I could rap to this if I wanted to. Nice work. The different pace of lust between man and women is exampled here fantastically.
Ascesa e rialzarsi fino a quando gli agnelli diventano leoni
Rise and Rise again until Lambs become lions
I like it. It's really honest and it has a nice sort of flow to it.