Pushed to the edge

I hear the shouting through the wall.

My ears can't take it anymore.

He yells and yells,

but he doesn't realize how far he's gone.

She's gonna leave soon.

I bet it will be this week.

He's finally pushed her to the edge.

I just want the fighting to stop.

She said I can't live with him.

I said it will be ok.

He just doesn't understand how much he hurt her.

I hate him,

I hate him,

I hate him!

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Justin's picture

I think this poem expresses a lot of emotion.

Kaylee Chernoff's picture

this poem is real powerfull and emotional in its own way..and it feels/sounds like you havent been going through a good time wuith al this tuff happening around you and your family/having your father pushing you both to the edge i bet you didnt feel so much at all at home for awhile(if you know what i mean)***(Ive been through alot like the same thing)*** Well keep up your awesome writting and illl be waiting to read more of your poems.