I hear the shouting through the wall.
My ears can't take it anymore.
He yells and yells,
but he doesn't realize how far he's gone.
She's gonna leave soon.
I bet it will be this week.
He's finally pushed her to the edge.
I just want the fighting to stop.
She said I can't live with him.
I said it will be ok.
He just doesn't understand how much he hurt her.
I hate him,
I hate him,
I hate him!
I think this poem expresses a lot of emotion.
this poem is real powerfull and emotional in its own way..and it feels/sounds like you havent been going through a good time wuith al this tuff happening around you and your family/having your father pushing you both to the edge i bet you didnt feel so much at all at home for awhile(if you know what i mean)***(Ive been through alot like the same thing)*** Well keep up your awesome writting and illl be waiting to read more of your poems.