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I stare i swear into space

reckoning the image of a familar face

I reach to touch not feeling very much

then i say i did the same yesterday

could this be true what does one do

avoid the pain that's lame

i'll come again tomorrow because there is no sorrow

to this very same place and stare into space

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I'm open for a suggestions to title this poem.

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Stephanie Karpierz's picture

I adore this one! I have some titles in mind but i need to think on them before i come to the right one.
I will return to leave you my ideas as you may do with them as your heart desires!
Very nice!. Keep writing, you're bringing out the poet in you :)

Sincerely,
Stephanie.

Ruth Lovejoy's picture

How about "Returning To Staring Space"