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Bliss
Bliss awaits in pungent cloud.
One so large you wonder
Just how it ended up there,
Like a bottled ship.
Increase the circumference,
And add to your knowledge.
The edge of our universe
Is farther than you think.
Our brain is strange indeed.
Its outer walls defined,
Yet infinitely inwards
One may travel into it.
Like a balloon it inflates
Its known outer limits.
With some help it discovers
New frontiers & planes of existence.
well done my new friend
Wow.. intense it makes one think of greater then ones self thats for sure!!!
Well done my friend... I look forward to reading more of your work.
As the eyes are the windows of our soul,
My poetry is the windows of my heart!!!
Bravo
Excellent from first to last line.
Starward
Why, thank you very
Why, thank you very much!
Perhaps the poem is without flaw,
Perhaps it is not, either way,
It gladdens me to know you
enjoy the piece.
We'll just keep writing 'til there's nothing left to write.
We'll just keep waiting 'til they read all our works left to right.
"Bliss awaits in pungent
"Bliss awaits in pungent cloud."
you had me at the opening line! Wonderful poem!
Thanks a lot! I do usually
Thanks a lot! I do usually try to open with a bang if i can, and it is nice to see my efforts weren't for nothing.
We'll just keep writing 'til there's nothing left to write.
We'll just keep waiting 'til they read all our works left to right.
Very true message.... No end to learning.Good to read Mr Sky
Very true message.... No end to learning.Good to read Mr Sky
©bishu
Big Thanks
Thank you very much for suggesting my piece for the Poet's Circle, I am inspired to find an awesome poem to suggest for next month!
We'll just keep writing 'til there's nothing left to write.
We'll just keep waiting 'til they read all our works left to right.
Thanks! And yes I agree there
Thanks! And yes I agree there are no limits when it comes to experiencnig and learning new things.
We'll just keep writing 'til there's nothing left to write.
We'll just keep waiting 'til they read all our works left to right.
"Our Brain...
is strange indeed..." I love that line. Congrats on making the Circle - Lady A
.
Thanks! When I wrote the
Thanks!
When I wrote the line I found it funny that the brain found itself funny, and so
I had no choice but to leave it there unalterEd through my editing process.
I'm glad now I left it intact.
We'll just keep writing 'til there's nothing left to write.
We'll just keep waiting 'til they read all our works left to right.