Did it ever even occur to me
That I'm not the gentle person you see
Maybe I'm just a deluted drifter
Who got lost in another person's tale
Maybe broken glass and burning stars
Have intoxicated me beyond resolve
And maybe I'm dead, maybe I'm not
Whatever the situation, I feel emptiness
And yet I can wave my hand in apathy
And pretend to love and then fall to my knees
Holding in tears eventually creates a problem
When you forget the trick in releasing them
And when propaganda seems like decoration
And virtual reality exceeds the alternative
Then it has become definite
We have a problem
It feels as if my life has fallen prey
To another's selfish needs today
But here I am without another
Without a need and without a bother
Though you're always there, always near
I wish I could share these fears
But I'm convinced, though I know I'm wrong
That you would misunderstand this cry gone wrong
Know what?
This poem sucks.
Bite me.
I strongly belive that you should continue writing. vent release yourself
Take a breath and don't be so hard on yourself.. I like this poem.. I think it's alright.. It questions motive and thoughts.. Stop being hard on yourself
your title drew me in...this is not a waste of writing...for the sole purpose of writing,continue
Nice poem.
5 stars......
No, this poem doesn't bite. Its rather good actually. I like ur usage of words. My poems are the ones that suck. I think u should continue writing =]
Manda
i actually thought this was good. I like the use of your words. I think you should continue writing to further develop your talent. thanx 4 posting
i like the part about broken glass and burning stars. i think you'd be surprised about how many people feel this way. im pretty hard on myself too.
Great post! (^-^) I liked it! Hello!!! Greetings from the Philippines!
yea dude, ur poems are fukin awsome mine suck. k bye -sammy