The neon spine of barren cities
And the running vibes of hate
The lone wolf of cardboard forests
And compassion with an expiration date
Poetic justice in place of law
And the artist’s decomposing fate
The exploding heart in electric jaw
And city wide soul in eclectic state
hi Alex...
how are you doing? um, yes. back to your critique...excellent title, excellent stanzas, excellent word choice, excellent excellent..and best of all...no boring repititious words! hehehe...excellentttt
nice!